Nice choice. Overall, I think you did a nice job.
That said, there appears to me more tension in your shot. I never noticed John's hand in the original until I checked to see why your shot has him grabbing her hair.
Is his leg raised off of her?
OK, just now got your message. my email is rseedphoto@gmail.com and I'm more likely to get messages there. so, are we meeting this sunday or what? or did I miss the boat?
I did not get to make it there. Diamanda had just gotten back from her summer visit to her European grandparents. There wasn't really time. Cool though. Diamanda is always excited to make new friends. She just hung out with her friend Sammy from Chenoweth today.